The writing matches the picture perfectly, it's a very mysterious and also a dark piece and the writing seems to reinforce this. Not only does the writing have it's own meaning but its is portrayed very well through the drawing making you question what happened to this person.
The composition on this piece really helped to make this artwork stand out for me. The fact that so much goes on in the near center of the page and the contrast of this with the simplistic etchy writing away from where my eyes are originally drawn to really works for me. It's intriguing, both the writing and the metaphorical take on the picture, with the eyes trapped in the body being the first place I observed.
This piece is simple, however it leaves you hungry for more. It brings up many questions for me which are left unanswered... For me personally art is about meaning and this captures that beautifully.
As much as I like the meaning behind the piece and the artwork itself, I feel as though something is missing. I think you could have taken this contrast even further. Maybe added a darker colour to portray the turmoil of emotions that this person is feeling, keeping the center white but adding a darker shade to the other parts of the drawing. This piece of artwork is very simple... So much could be tweaked or changed, however the simplistic style really works for this piece. adding too much detail in my opinion might dilute the strong meaning.
Other than this, I really like this piece of artwork. Its shows that utalising simplistic style can still portray a lot of emotion.
Just keep up the good work